the coal re-chute :)

[payn817]

Tried again, with different angles, and at sunset instead of sunrise. Any comments would be greatly appreciated...

[CLKunst]

Payn
I REALLY REALLY like this!!! The first one is just excellent. The colors, the composition the way the falling light breaks up the building, all really excellent. Good job!

. . .and also a little phallic. That's probably just me though.

Regards,

[Knight]

Superb color and light tones Payn817 , like the angle of your shooting also keep up the good work

Ps: looking at your exif i C you still have your Kodak

[dbutler]

I have been really torn between the two but I think I'm going for the first. I love the color on both, but seeing so much more of the chute just really brings it home.

[juzzus]

Very clean , sharp images ... without a doubt the first one looks more complete than the second one ... Nice color too .

[Chunk]

That first shot is really good. The warm light is dramatic and you've held the shadow detail too. Nice angle.

[payn817]

Thanks to you all! I am very happy with this reshoot.

CLKunst, now that you mention it...

you're sooo bad!!

Knight, yeah I actually got it back, the story is in a thread on viewfinder titled "when did you start photography", some personal problems almost took me away from shooting, but I pulled it back together, and have been coming up pretty dry since about August, then today, I just got inspired.

[jar_e]

I personally enjoy the second one, that blue skiy is quite amazing and the conrasting warm brown tones are great!

Well done,

Jared

[Hindey]

I'm with Jared, the second one's composition and colour just work wonderfully.

I also love the "re-chute" pun, but I'm a bit sad like that

Chris

[payn817]

I'm with Jared, the second one's composition and colour just work wonderfully.

I also love the "re-chute" pun, but I'm a bit sad like that

Chris

Since I wrote it does that make me sad too? Thanks for looking/commenting Chris!
Jared, It is my favorite of the four also, but I knew people would want a more straight on shot, so I posted one, thanks for your kind words.