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    C'mon baby, shake

    Not sure how I can make this picture better...... the picture can't be 'retaken' because of the circumstances(and the models - hehe) but I wonder if blurring the background would help??

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    Re: C'mon baby, shake

    Here it is with a blur.....

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    Re: C'mon baby, shake

    Way to be at the right place at the right time. I like it better with the blurred background.

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    Re: C'mon baby, shake

    Aw, very cute. And yes, the blurred background is much better IMO. With a little crop too you could get out some of the building and part of the grill too. That might help?

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    Re: C'mon baby, shake

    I agree about cropping it a little and the blurred background does work out! Nice job...what a cute shot.

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    Re: C'mon baby, shake

    Is this any better??

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    Re: C'mon baby, shake

    ChowChi-Ching - I like the crop but think I would expand it out a little to include all of the kid's right arm and hand. The blurred one is also an improvement. Nice timing btw

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    Re: C'mon baby, shake

    Blurred is better and like GB1, I think you cropped a little too much.
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    Re: C'mon baby, shake

    Okay..... hehe, how is this crop??

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    Re: C'mon baby, shake

    The last edit is definatly the best. Awsome shot.
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    Re: C'mon baby, shake

    Thanks everyone!
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