Club Twister

[GB1]

"2nd best club in Tanzania." We don't see anyone saying that here.

C&C welcome.

G

[Skyman]

I love it. I would like to see more of that sign though

[Didache]

It makes me wonder about the BEST club!

Photographically a very daring "slant" on things, literally as well as metaphorically - I think it adds an extra dimension to it. The paper posted to the tree is critical I think as it closes off the right hand side very nicely. I would consider though cloning out the remnant of the "Coming Soon" on the left side as it is a little messy - tough call though.

Cheers
Mike

[shootme]

I'm with Mike on this, include coming soon or lose it. I really like the slant and the big tree on the right helps make it work. Very nice.

[Greg McCary]

The tilt is daring as Mike stated. The only thing that bugs me is the young mans foot sticking out of the frame. Everything else seems well placed.

[GB1]

Thanks guys. I will have to recheck the original and see if I cropped anything off on this one that I might put back in to get the Coming Soon and foot in there.

This shot was taken from the bus. It reminded me of Don's series. Upon review of them most looked.. well, like they were taken from a bus.. I wish I could have gotten off and did the slow investigative thing but you can only take what you can get.

G

[GB1]

Sorry .. the original clips off the Coming Soon and the poor kid's foot :mad2: Ahh, bus shots.......

G

[MarcusK]

Well... for a bus shot then... it sure works.... Nothing to add that has not already been said!

[MB1]

I love the composition and catch but really wish the colors were more vibrant.