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    clock and leaf

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    Re: clock and leaf

    I want more light on the clock face and I think the leaf is too prominent in the image (perhaps if it were behind the clock?).

    Nice clock.

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    Re: clock and leaf

    I also think the clock should be lighter. I think what is distracting about the leaf is the blown highlight which just screams for attention.

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    Re: clock and leaf

    Yes, it is a little dark. I thought it was going to be a real leaf, maybe one falling from a tree... and you could call it "Half Past Fall", or something. Guess I'm just too corny...
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