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Greg, I like the colors and texture of the first image best, but the perspective and the bird of this one make it a more interesting shot...but I would be tempted to "move" the bird to the other image, and brighten up cliff face of that shot and maybe saturate the stone a bit. Between the two, there just might be a pretty unique composition.
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Greg, I like the colors and texture of the first image best, but the perspective and the bird of this one make it a more interesting shot...but I would be tempted to "move" the bird to the other image, and brighten up cliff face of that shot and maybe saturate the stone a bit. Between the two, there just might be a pretty unique composition.
Ken, That's an idea there, though the more I look at the Cliff 1 pic, the less I like it. It's just too pedestrian. This one has a little more punch and the bird adds a strange twist -- wish this was an old dilapidated building, the bird would add some evil to the scene
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Thanks Greg. Yeah a little farther away would have been better. It's more discreet this way though, makes you look twice.
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Have you thought of moving the bird about where the first cliff ends - move the bird backwards which would balance the shot better.
I like the photo.
I liken this to photographing boats where you need space for the boat to move into.
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