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Thread: City scape

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    Firefighter Tyson L. Sparks's Avatar
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    City scape

    Did I hit one out of the park or is it a so so?
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    Re: City scape

    I love the colors and contrast of the buildings against the sky. It looks very sharp I would image a large print would show all the fine detail of the buildings. My vote for a sticky. Nice Tyson.
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    Re: City scape

    wonderful sky complement the building very nicely

    I would make the center building vertical, it leans to the right as it is now

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    Re: City scape

    I like it, though it is hard to "knock it out of the park" with a relatively modern cityscape, IMHO. I think you're rendered it as well as it could be done.

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    Re: City scape

    I would say both! I love the sky and feel you did a great job exposing both the sky and the buildings. Like armando said, it is tilted to the right, so I would correct that. But for me it lacks a complete subject. I guess you can say the sky is the subject, but I love architecture and none of the buildings are complete. Great job none the less!
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    Re: City scape

    Wow thank you for the feed back, if anyone wants to try an edit they are welcome to.

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