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    city ahead

    a photo of a nite time drive ( i wasnt driving at the time as i dont drive lol )


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    Re: city ahead

    nice shot, although the right side does nothing for it. I feel that the batch of lights should be the central point of the photo....with them off to the side, it leads me to believe that there is something more to see, but there isn't. Kudos for pulling off to the side of the road for this shot (I assume that is how you got this shot).

    judging by the grain, I assume this is film? Maybe a little burn/dodge on the right side would do....I have a feeling it may be a bit overexposed too, maybe?
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    Re: city ahead

    it was taken from the passanger seat while the car was going along( i think the grain is because the window was dirty ) the motoway, i was board so took a few shots i was going to crop the right part off the phot but would need to crop from the top or bottom as well to give it more balance but didnt want to cut the road or lights out

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    Re: city ahead

    oh I see....your description led me to believe that you had pulled over....but that explains some of the detail in the photo....in that case, nice shot from a moving vehicle.
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