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    WARNING Takes Random Pictures MonkeyWrench's Avatar
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    Church in BW and Color Post 2

    Here is my second attempt. This was taken in full sun and I included as much as I could on the sides and was a little more generous with the bottom. I am still working on my BW post processing but I think this one came out better than the first one. Several things I myself have issues with is that it is not a standard crop and the distorted angles caused by the wide-angle lens. I tried my best to fix the distortion but my post processing skills are even more lacking than my picture taking ones. I realize the crop was a bit tight on the first one, but I still like the first color one the best. All comments and suggestions are welcomed. Please feel free to edit and post your suggestions.
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    Re: Church in BW and Color Post 2

    Not sure if I grabbed the wrong pics or what but I just got a chance to look at these online and not sure what happend to the quality. Did this in a hurry at work....Will take another look when I have more time.

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    Re: Church in BW and Color Post 2

    looks like it's tilted pretty hard to the left.
    the conversion looks good but i think the image suffers from bad lighting. the noon sun is never very flattering. try coming back at 6-7am or 7-8pm. early morning or late afternoon usually provides the best light.

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    Re: Church in BW and Color Post 2

    Not sure about the tilt. The verticals on the left seem straight enough, although I can't really tell because of the shadows--I think it was the angle from which you took it. That can be corrected with a little distorting and skewing, I think. I'm in total agreement with ZL on the lighting though. The noon sun is brutal. This is a great subject though. Keep at it.
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    Re: Church in BW and Color Post 2

    maybe it isn't tilted. my eye might be thrown off by the sidewalk on the bottom on the image

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    Re: Church in BW and Color Post 2

    The whole thing seems to be leaning backwards. Probably perspective lean. Getting to higher ground would help.
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