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I agree the b&w edit is too dark. I think you can crop off the right side of the photo into a square crop to eliminate the black area to the right. Also, be careful of the things in the background when taking a shot. The ladder to the bunkbed looks to be coming out of the subjects head. A different angle would have positioned the ladder away from the subject. You could remove the ladder in photoshop if you wanted.
I actually prefer the color in this one. The b&w somehow does not make this feel like we are back in time, but the colors give me the feeling of a childs room especially the bright cartoonish colors of his pajamas. The colors bring to me more the feeling of a child's innocence.