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  1. 04-20-2006, 05:18 PM #1
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    Cheridan and Oscar

    Image of my daughter Cheridan with the family mutt Oscar..

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  2. 04-20-2006, 08:29 PM #2
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    Re: Cheridan and Oscar

    Nice work. Pictures like this of the ones we love are why so many of us first got into photography.

    Is it possible that the dog is more in-focus than your daughter? See seems softer to me, but I would expect that at f/8. If I could change one thing in your photo it would be the sky color. It washes out too much and I find myself looking up there when viewing the lovely photo. I'm sure you can think of several ways to handle it, so I won't deleneate them here.
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  3. 04-21-2006, 12:41 AM #3
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    Re: Cheridan and Oscar

    I think LL nailed the critique on this photo - but I think its the sky thats throwing the softness on the foreground by being too bright.

    One other thing I would consider is to clone out the railing in the background.

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  4. 04-21-2006, 03:52 AM #4
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    Cheridan and Oscar - Take 2

    A few changes..

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    Re: Cheridan and Oscar

    Much better

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  6. 04-21-2006, 03:39 PM #6
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    Re: Cheridan and Oscar

    Thanx Roger..

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