Photo Critique Forum

Please post no more than five images a day and respond to as many images as you post. Critics, please be constructive, specific, and nice! Moderated by gahspidy and mtbbrian.
Featured Photo
Photo by hminx

Photo by hminx
Featured Photo Archive >>
By posting on the Photo Critique forum you agree to post only your own photos, be respectful, and give back as much as you receive. This is a moderated forum and anything abusive or off-topic will be removed.
Results 1 to 3 of 3
  1. #1
    Senior Member arne saknussen's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jul 2010
    Location
    Atlanta, GA
    Posts
    1,145

    Cheap close up lens test 2: Forked Again

    Ok, I made a few adjustments, mostly a different subject. I found one major problem with the corkscrew pic, but my natural light went away before I could adapt it.
    Hopefully this will at least show an improvement.


  2. #2
    Senior Member
    Join Date
    Aug 2006
    Location
    Toronto, Ontario, Canada
    Posts
    1,477

    Re: Cheap close up lens test 2: Forked Again

    This is much better than the corkscrew. There is a nice range on the 2nd fork tine that is shrply in focus and a nice feeling to the blur behind. I like the contrasting colours on the other fork in the background adding even more interest in the bokeh. IMO nice job and an excellent improvement
    Shooting with an Olympus Evolt E-510 and loving it


    Equipment list:
    Olympus Evolt E-3, E-620, E-500
    Olympus Zuiko 40 - 150 F4.0 - 5.6
    Olympus Zuiko 14 - 45 F 2.8 - 3.6
    Sigma 50 - 500 F 4.0 - 6.3
    Sigma 70 - 200 F2.8
    Olympus FL-38 Flash x2
    Vivitar 285 HV
    Better Beamer Flash Extender

    http://www.jdtimages.ca/

    A Photographer that is fluent in Sarcasm.

  3. #3
    Senior Member armando_m's Avatar
    Join Date
    Oct 2009
    Location
    Guadalajara Mexico
    Posts
    4,486

    Re: Cheap close up lens test 2: Forked Again

    oh yeah, way better than the first post!

    I like the colorful reflection in the background fork

    There is a general foggy look to the image, perhaps increasing the contrast can get rid of it

Thread Information

Users Browsing this Thread

There are currently 1 users browsing this thread. (0 members and 1 guests)

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •