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    Chaos

    I am really not convinced about that one. I like how the colors turned out but it's so busy, I am not sure if it can works or not.

    comments are welcome

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    Re: Chaos

    Quote Originally Posted by Seb
    I am really not convinced about that one. I like how the colors turned out but it's so busy, I am not sure if it can works or not.

    comments are welcome

    Seb
    Really nice background in many ways. Here is my (tongue-in-cheek) suggestion... ;)
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    Re: Chaos

    Quote Originally Posted by Lava Lamp
    Really nice background in many ways. Here is my (tongue-in-cheek) suggestion... ;)

    lol, I like your style! (the thing is that this kind of background would most likely distract from any model but I get your point...)

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    Re: Chaos

    Seb,

    Either your a lot older than me or you got some ugly models LOL (Very sexist I know applogies no offence intended).

    As for the photo - I like the colours in this but its a tad busy, if you croped the top beam out and out of the right side and less of the frame on the left but then you'd lose the pipes on top of the oven or whatever it is.

    Don't know what to suggest really other than the model as previously hinted at.

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    Re: Chaos

    Seb, while it sure is busy, i like it because evrything in it is interesting and I find myself studing it over to take in all that is there. I don't think any crop or subject would add . I think it has an appeal even if it is busy
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    Re: Chaos

    My first reaction was also that it was very busy. But like Gary, I found myself wandering through and picking at everything. I especially wonder about what would happen if I flipped the switches in that circuit box! It's like going into one of those antique shops with all the little stuff you pick up and poke at wondering what it ever did. Fun!
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    Re: Chaos

    Thanks folks!

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