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    Chanting Nuns and Lonely Man

    Here is a couple of shots I took of nuns, let me know what you think, too boring? dull? not seeing anything special?
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    Re: Chanting Nuns and Lonely Man

    Interesting stuff. Would be nice you to had taken ( if possible ) three steps backwards and one to the right so we could have seen all five Nuns in first shot. All seem just a wee bit soft. Hopefully someone here with more technical expertise than myself can help you with that...
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    Re: Chanting Nuns and Lonely Man

    I like your first shot except for the cut off feet and the half face hidden.
    2nd is ok but background distracts.
    3rd is the winner but don't like the bottles. Could use some crop on right.
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    Re: Chanting Nuns and Lonely Man

    These would work better in a series of some kind telling of this day or the lives of these people. As they are now, sort of stand alone i don't get the significance of any of these shots, although the first one is interesting in its own. Too tightly cropped though as pointed out.
    i'm noticing that focus is soft with these where it should be sharp, on the faces.
    IDo you shoot with AF? If so, do you use selection points? Focus selection points in the viewfinder is a good way of telling the camera what you want in focus.
    please do not edit and repost my photos


    gary


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