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Any thoughts on the clearly over-processed image? - Terry
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I think you nailed it with "over processed." I would have chosen a different lighting mode if this was done in photomatix. HDR is certainly based on preference, and it's clear you weren't going for photorealism here, which is certainly ok. I think I would like to see it darkened up a bit...maybe make it a bit more moody, as it also seems a bit flat.
I played around with it a bit using some detail enhancement by adding an inverted surface blur and saturating/darkening the yellows in the hue/saturation panel of cs6
p.s. It looks like I lost some IQ when reupping the image.
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Intensive Post here Terry. It's not that I don't like it, but I do think it may work better w/ another subject: perhaps a more sterile/clean environment like a hospital hallway. or even a spaceship prop.
I want to see this scene in the dark with only a few offset lights baring illuminating it, making it seem sinister (sorry Matt! ).
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There is a Norman Rockwell type of quality to this, which I like. Perhaps a little too many mid-tones for my flavor ...I would like to see some more blacks. Also, I am not sure how I feel about the corner in the upper left and the Dr's bag at the left side edge ....otherwise, very nice.
Captured with the Sony A-900 (FF) with a 17-35 at 17mm. 1.3 sec+ at f/8. Multi-image HDR/tonemapping with Photomatix.
The blacks would certainly move it more towards the sinister, but I often find the 'sterile' to be even more frightening.
Agree that the edges would need cleaning up for a competition image.
Again, thanks all.
Terry
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I am no better than you. I critique to teach myself to see.
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Feel free to edit my photos or do anything else that will help me learn.
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Sony/Minolta - way more gear than talent.