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    Love + Music + Photography = Life CLKunst's Avatar
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    Cemetery Bluebirds

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    Re: Cemetery Bluebirds

    Haha. That is a pretty fun shot.

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    Re: Cemetery Bluebirds

    i like the symmetry (no pun intended) in this one. it's a light photo, almost looks like the real bird is somewhat of a queen with the other two (non-real) birds carrying it in some sorta carriage lol. ok, i think i might have gone too far. but that's what it conveys to me. love the blue birds pose also. looking back over the shoulder.

    for improvement, i think even more symmetry would've helped, like look at the corners of the two lines that are intersecting the semi-cirlces. they aren't entirely symmetrical, just a tiny bit off. that's just a really tiny nit pick though. nicely done.

    edit: actually i think it's the lettering that isn't centered in the space, nothing u can do about that.
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    Love + Music + Photography = Life CLKunst's Avatar
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    Re: Cemetery Bluebirds

    Thanks Daq!

    Thanks Liban! I did shoot for as much symmetry as possible here but as you observed the sign isn't entirely. It's also been flipped to make the sign read correctly so there may be some small perspective aberration besides. That was as close as she let me get too. I scooched a bit after this shot and she was off. Happy for what I got really as this was the first time in my life I'd seen a real blue bird.
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