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Thread: Causeway- UT

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    Causeway- UT

    Taken off the causeway to Antelope Island last thanksgiving.

    Thoughts? I know, I hate that I left a part of Antelope Island in the photo... If I print it 8x10 I can crop that off, but I dunno... Maybe I need to home my cloning skills...



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    Re: Causeway- UT

    I quite like this. Very vibrant, but it works for me.

    I love how the ripples look almost like the originated from the child. Did they throw a rock before you shot this?

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    Re: Causeway- UT

    I love the picture!!! I wish the saturation of the child and possibly the foreground was a touch less than the water and sky. It just looks imposable, but the sky and water is believable.
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    Re: Causeway- UT

    i really like the colours in this - looks great!

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    Re: Causeway- UT

    Nice shot. The red stripes in the shirt are too saturated for my taste and if you could tone done the brightness of the foreground shrubs, I think this would be even stronger . I totally agree on crop of the island.

    Chris

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    Re: Causeway- UT

    Thanks for the comments! I also thought the shirt/hair/foreground was too saturated, but doing a local adjustment never crossed my mind. I'm thinking of hanging this one on the wall so I wanted it to be right before I go to all that trouble.

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