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    Carbide and Carbon - what happens when I can' sleep

    So - I woke up early this morning with the idea ...what if I added a starry sky to this image? I know the reflections will never work right ...but I still like it for some reason ...too crazy?
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    Re: Carbide and Carbon - what happens when I can' sleep

    I think the starry sky looks just fine, it doesn't look over the top at all. The darkened top section makes this quite creditable. You could possibly darken it a tad more.
    Pete

    Isn't it a cool thing in nature that the colours never seem to clash...

    I have no issues with you editing my photos

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    Re: Carbide and Carbon - what happens when I can' sleep

    Really good job ! the sky certainly looks credible!

    How about cloning the left triangle on the left ? I do not think it adds anything

    Maybe for the reflections will be better if you make them a slightly different color temp, just so they appear slightly different to the rest of the facade ?

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    Re: Carbide and Carbon - what happens when I can' sleep

    The credibility issue for me is created by the fact there is enough light for a strong reflection of the building across the street in the windows in your subject building; however, I do like the overall composition of the image.

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