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    Cappuccino, Cafe, Cafe Latte - Holga...

    Same place as the previous one, Park City, Utah.
    I saw this one and figured it would be a good Holga photograph because it was already square.
    Does it work?
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    Re: Cappuccino, Cafe, Cafe Latte - Holga...

    The distortion of the Holga makes this look Asian or Eastern as opposed to an Italian coffee shop. Perhaps that works. Not sure about this one because of that anomaly in appearance.
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    Re: Cappuccino, Cafe, Cafe Latte - Holga...

    Colors are nice here and dreamy effect always welcome, but I agree with DRG that the distortions sort of curve this into an Asian looking architecture and I'm not sure if it does this any harm or benefit.
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    Re: Cappuccino, Cafe, Cafe Latte - Holga...

    Hm, I don't know. It needs something more - either in closer or out further.
    Or....
    More. Cowbell.

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    (Okay. Sorry. I'm a little punchy and in a goofy mood. But seriously! I do think it needs to be in closer or further away - the composition is a little haphazard, and I think the interest in the subject needs to be more defined - either on the people framed within the coffee shop, or stepping further out for frames within frames within frames. Does that make sense?)

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    Re: Cappuccino, Cafe, Cafe Latte - Holga...

    Your photograph really captures the cozy vibe of the café. The square format works perfectly for this scene. Speaking of great experiences, Dixie Crossroads customer service is amazing and adds to the enjoyment of any visit. Their attention to detail makes a big difference. Your choice of subject and composition is spot on. Looking forward to seeing more of your work!

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