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This is very sweet! The only nitpick I have is that the last photo, the white that's framing him (I'm not sure what you were looking through) is not the same as the other two shots...and it makes the photos seem like they're not quite even...but I've not done a triptych, so I don't know if that's essential...?
At any rate, the photos are well done, and my fave is the first with him looking at the camera.
That's my nit with this one too. But this was the test drive for the idea not the final. I'll fiddle with it more tomorrow. Actually I think it's the middle one that's short and it's making the last one look more off balance as a result. The white bits are slats of a crib. I had my everything turned sideways to watch him without bothering him as he drifted off. He's such a sweet baby. Thanks for commenting Emily!
No never mind the last two are both off. Definitely more fiddling tomorrow.
CL - Nice idea. Like Emily mentioned, the framing is somewhat uneven, though I find the middle one to be the most different. The frames are almost a tease, like they're blocking the full view of the baby's head, and we want to see more but can't. I don't know if that's good for this subject, but who knows - a different twist can be fun.
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