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    Calle



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    Re: Calle

    So great to see your shots again! This is a great sharp night shot. I love how you capture a relatively dark, sometimes forboding place, and yet include a glimmer of hope with areas of light.
    To be critical, I would have to say that I would have liked to have sen the couple (just beyond the vans) more into the scene and maybe clone out some of the white spots in the pavement. But the overall mood is spot on.

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    Re: Calle

    Thanks Arne. I was torn about the spots on the street. glad to know they distract you. Thanks for all the suggestions.
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    Re: Calle

    Great exposure, sharpness, color. I find myself looking for a person or other point of interest in there -- especially the way the perspective forces your eye up the middle -- but I don't find one. This seems like it needs a "Waldo" like in the "Where's Waldo?" prints, if that makes my critique any clearer.

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