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Thread: Bus Ride Home

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    Re: Bus Ride Home

    First one seems a little out of focus
    Second one, amazing background
    Third one really tells a story, like this shot a lot. Less of the wall would help it though
    Fourth one looks noisy and overexposed.

    Only my thoughts though. Nice shots.
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    Re: Bus Ride Home

    Right on ll counts. The forth photo was out of focus--grab shot so I used my technique of superimposing an oversharpened layer on the original photo. On my monitor it looks posterish but neat.

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    Re: Bus Ride Home

    Bummers the first image is soft. That bright spot of red would have really stood out in a sharp image against all those earth tones. Toss it and try again.

    Great reflections in the second image. Try for that look again with a better/more interesting view out the window.

    The third image is killer. At first I wasn't sure about the shadow placement but on further reflection I think that makes the image more poignant. One of your best.

    The 4th? Another "Almost but toss."
    No, I DON'T need that.

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