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Thread: A Brothers Love

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    A Brothers Love

    After a day out with the boys. Quick stop at a few roadside flowers for a fast get out and shoot.
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    Re: A Brothers Love

    I would crop off the left up to his shirt sleeve and the same on the right, making it more of a portrait shot. The lack of light on the boy in back makes it look like he has black eyes which may be the case considering the tittle. Fill flash would have helped here.
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    Re: A Brothers Love

    I agree that some side cropping would improve things here but it is a nice image of 2 boys.

    I'm thinking crop from the right until it is a square image. That would have the added benefit of removing the darkness in the upper right corner making the whole image seem lighter. As it is now the whole thing seems just a bit dark.
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