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    Brother & Sister

    F100 -SB-28 Fill flash that I really didn't need to use.
    85mm Ap mode F4
    Ilford HP-5 400 ASA

    My old flatbed scanner doesn't show how sharp the print really is.
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    Where is Snowy? Yoyo Szeto's Avatar
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    Hi,
    I like the posture of the girl and the wolves on the boy's T-shirt. I think the boy was a little nervious.
    All the best.
    yoyo

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    ...just believe natatbeach's Avatar
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    for starters HI! then clone out the dorknob from ove his head...

    I would crop tighter on this unless you absolutely like the fact that toesies are showing. Brother looks a little uncomfortable at such an extreme show of affection from sis---but sis is enjoying every minute of it. i love the expression on her face which really makes it a shot that will be great to give 'em when they're older.

    i would adjust the contrast and try a few different angles if they are willing to repose.
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    I wasn't trying to change society, or to be ahead of my time.
    I didn't think of myself as liberated, and I don't believe that I did anything important.
    I was just myself. I didn't know any other way to be, or any other way to live."
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