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I must say that I am not sure about that one. I like the composition and how you included things in the frame. There is an obvious care there. On the other hand, I can't help feeling that the scene is too dreary or common. I guess that a good b&w conversion with some dodging and burning to add extra drama would lead to a fine result.
To sum things up, I see this as a good base for something rather than a final product.
This is a strange photograph Tuna and it gives me the creeps. Sort of David Lynch (ish). Everything is so obvious but it can't be.
The bold colours are great and lots of geometry around.
The white lines on the grey house relate well with the white trim on the jeep. That was the initial attraction for me.
Tom
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