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    Bridging the view. . .

    Hey guys, I was in town working on a project for Uni. This is one such image I took.
    I wish I could adjust the white buildings but they didnt come out right on the original photograph. I would like to go back and re-shoot the view as I feel it could be a lot better. I would like to open the gap between the bridges and create more seperation so they do actually look like two bridges. Not just one big one.

    Before I go back though can anyone make some suggestions on what I might try?



    This is my second photo. I really like it. I looked through a building site. To achieve this artificial frame. The scaffolding lines created lines that looked like the edges of windows. I took the shot. Rotated it and cropped it to a rectangle. Critique welcome.

    Feel free to adjust my pictures and re-post them if necesary.






    Thanks, Regards TiTanV
    Last edited by titanv; 09-29-2007 at 03:46 PM.

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    Re: Bridging the view. . .

    If nothing else those are great compositions. I would try fill flash on the first image but you could also take several exposures and combine in PhotoShop.
    No, I DON'T need that.

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