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    Re: The Bridge

    Again nice work Tuna. Perfect framing. The windows on the right are perfectly placed as with the man.
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    Re: The Bridge

    In addition to what Greg is saying, I like what appears to be the transition as suggested by the man captured in the 'bridge' as going from an older building to a more modern one. Just the way I see it, of course.

    Nicely done, Tuna.

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    Re: The Bridge

    I love your composition...thanks for the lesson......I keep coming back to this one.

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    Re: The Bridge

    Hi Tuna, Very nice composition. I love the graininess feel you have brought here. Well done.

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    Re: The Bridge

    Interesting geometry Tuna. I like how you left more space below the bridge than above it. I guess you had to wait a few until you saw someone walking to capture this moment.

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    Re: The Bridge

    Tuna,

    I really do like the way this composition breaks the photo into 5 areas to investigate. One day I may see the world the way that you do, but I have a long way to go till that happens.

    I like the mood that TRI X gives this photo and the capture of the person walking across the bridge nailes it for me. Speaks volumes of the lonliness found in city centres.

    One thing that keeps distracting me is the white poster or something at the bottom of the light pole under the bridge.

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    Great shot. I like how busy it is but the man walking still totally stands out. Excellent work.
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    Re: The Bridge

    very nice composition....great geometry here. lots of fun angles, and negative space. Good shot!
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