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In addition to what Greg is saying, I like what appears to be the transition as suggested by the man captured in the 'bridge' as going from an older building to a more modern one. Just the way I see it, of course.
Nicely done, Tuna.
John
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Interesting geometry Tuna. I like how you left more space below the bridge than above it. I guess you had to wait a few until you saw someone walking to capture this moment.
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I really do like the way this composition breaks the photo into 5 areas to investigate. One day I may see the world the way that you do, but I have a long way to go till that happens.
I like the mood that TRI X gives this photo and the capture of the person walking across the bridge nailes it for me. Speaks volumes of the lonliness found in city centres.
One thing that keeps distracting me is the white poster or something at the bottom of the light pole under the bridge.
Roger
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