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  1. 06-10-2008, 08:50 PM #1
    Tyson L. Sparks
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    Bored little girl

    I took this at a wedding I did last weekend, I just got the shot right before she moved. I wish I had had the time to zoom out a little but I'll take it for what it is. What do you guys think.
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    Re: Bored little girl

    I like it. Maybe crop some from the left.
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    Re: Bored little girl

    Gotta use the fill flash in light like that.

    Looks like a fun image to include in a wedding album.

    Print a few copies for her parents to display at her wedding!
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    Re: Bored little girl

    It's a lovely photograph Tyson and a nice moment. Conditions here were not the easiest and you have produced a good result. She is beautiful against a perfect background.
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  5. 06-11-2008, 06:04 AM #5
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    Re: Bored little girl

    Great expression on the girl's face. Nice shot Tyson. A bit of a hot spot on her left shoulder, but should be easily corrected in PS. I agree with the suggestion regarding the cropping a bit on the left side. Nice capture.
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