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    Re: Bored

    This is adorable, I love it, looks like a book cover! Very well done! The color is fantastic, The tree in the window is great, I just wish it wasnt so blown out.

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    Re: Bored

    Very nice and bright. Very pleasant composition as well. I only question the blanket that is over something another object, it seems a little distracting/busy for me. If there was something else there that the girl could be imagining, or maybe that is the intent, we see blanket over chair (or whatever), the girl sees something else.
    But thats not a deal breaker, its a very lovely shot.

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    Re: Bored

    I appreciate the feedback. I've personally grown to think that this one is way over done.
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    Re: Bored

    Quote Originally Posted by n8
    I appreciate the feedback. I've personally grown to think that this one is way over done.
    I respectively disagree. Its your photo, of course, but try isolating certain elements of this shot (ie, the teddy bear, the window and the tree, the window frame, etc,) and then look at them as a group and I think you might see a pretty darn good shot.

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