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Thread: Boat

  1. 06-15-2007, 01:45 PM #1
    Tyson L. Sparks
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    Boat

    I don,t know about this one, tell me your thoughts.



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  2. 06-15-2007, 02:22 PM #2
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    Re: Boat

    Tyson,

    I like the boat and the reflection, but the background is a little distracting.You have a great story with the father and kids in the boat and the stuff on the shore doesn't really add to that.

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  3. 06-15-2007, 03:35 PM #3
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    Re: Boat

    I would crop it just above the fathers head and level it. I agree it's a nice shot, great one for fathers day.
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  4. 06-15-2007, 07:27 PM #4
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    Re: Boat

    Yep, the reflection's the key to this IMO. PC and Greg are right.
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  5. 06-15-2007, 07:35 PM #5
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    Re: Boat

    Nice reflection and very sharp picture. I agree about the crop everything else destracts from the main focus.
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