My first post

[rafageounb]

Hello everyone.

I'm knew here and kind of new to the photography world.

All I know I learned from web and two books that I bought - basics. Now I started a course - intermediary photography, classes 1 once/week.

My first assign was to shot B&W in a university in the city. I was told to watch for geometry, forms. I'll share 2 that I liked most. I'd appreciate any comments - either composition suggestions or technical ones. I need both to improve my shots.

Fist you will see a girl using a computer. Ok, I took the photo, so yes I love it! haha. The photo didnt receive any kind of post-treatment. Direct from the camera to you.

What I liked most here is the light and the shadows on her. I cant see his face, but he talks to me. Her posture is very straight, her arms and back looked great in the BM. She has personality, it show me how strong she is. I can see geometry in every corner of the scene, but it also show me emotion on it. Math and emotion together!

What do you think? How could I improved? Ty guys!

EDITED - Ok I dont know why the photo is in landscape, it should show straight up! i think if you click on it it'll show the way it should be!!

EDITED 2 - I took the photo using my Canon T4i with a 55-250mm (171mm focal lenght). ISO 400, Av 5.6 and 1/160 Speed.