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Thread: Blue swan

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    Blue swan

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    I went out this morning to try my new polarizing filter out along the sea front. This swan took off before I had chance to change anything so I took these. Trouble is theres a blue line under the swan also along the front edge of the wing. i know there not great photos but I'm pleased with them and any advice on how to rectify them would be appreciated.

    Frank
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    Re: Blue swan

    out of these, the first one is the strongest. The last two the wing positions aren't very flattering. Out of the first two, The first one has a nicer placement of the bird. I think they all suffer from a soft colour cast. I would maybe add a bit of contrast to them. hope that helped.
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    Re: Blue swan

    I agree with Liban that the first one works best but, I would like to see more light on the neck and head --- and, a full reflection in the water. Having said that, I know how difficult it is to get this kind of subject to cooperate and, I think you did very well, considering.

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