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    Blue Shell - experimental

    I took this picture as an experiment in September, and I just decided to post it to see what opinions are about it. It was never a completed shot, so keep that in mind, just something I did one day when I was bored.



    I used a blue light.
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    Re: Blue Shell - experimental

    Interesting idea. You might try to use a gradient as effect to shade the blue or vary the tonality in some way.

    A slight rotation of the shell or placing it a less centered fashion could also add to the overall visual appeal.
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    Re: Blue Shell - experimental

    Thanks for the comments and ideas, I'll see what I can do when I can find the time.
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    Re: Blue Shell - experimental

    i like it cool effect how or what did you use light wise
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    Re: Blue Shell - experimental

    Quote Originally Posted by J-Dogg Productions
    i like it cool effect how or what did you use light wise
    I used a blue christmas light bulb in a nightlight about a foot or two away from the shell. The shutter speed was a few seconds, but I forget how long to be exact.
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    Re: Blue Shell - experimental

    cool nice job
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    Re: Blue Shell - experimental

    David,

    Nice shot, just a couple of minor critiques, the hot part on the right of the shell, and the left side could do with a tad more light/reflection just do define the edge of the shell.

    Nice bit of creativity:idea: , but may I ask a rude question? Well I will anyway. Why did you have Christmas lights out in September ? Mine are still tucked up for the summer at this point .

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    Re: Blue Shell - experimental

    nice shot! wish i had this for my project i just had to do with blue. I think the centering actually works well here, and I'm usually not a fan of centered subjects.

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    Re: Blue Shell - experimental

    Quote Originally Posted by readingr
    David,

    Nice shot, just a couple of minor critiques, the hot part on the right of the shell, and the left side could do with a tad more light/reflection just do define the edge of the shell.

    Nice bit of creativity:idea: , but may I ask a rude question? Well I will anyway. Why did you have Christmas lights out in September ? Mine are still tucked up for the summer at this point .

    Roger
    Good comments and questions. That hot part on the right also bugs me, since I noticed it, so I'll be sure to fix that, and same with the darkened side.

    My "studio" is actually just a space I have clear underneath my house, with a ceiling of maybe four feet and a dirt floor with tarp over it. We keep a lot of stuff down there, such as christmas lights. Also, I really like to do things with colors, so any chance I get, I will see what I can do with colors. So, working 20 feet away from the christmas lights and wanting color made an obvious connection, and I used an old nightlight as a socket.
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