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    ner
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    Bishop, CA

    4x5 Agfapan 100 in PMK on Oriental Seagull in Ansco 135 with normal Se toning. Copyright N. Riley, 1987. For additional images, please see my web site:
    http://normanrileyphotography.com/
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    This is a beautiful shot! it's sharp, has perfect composition, contrast, and dramatic skies. i can't think of a thing to critique on it. well done!
    "Too much color blinds the eye."
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    It's great. It has good depth and perspective. And the print is perfect. I like how yo burnt in the clouds so dark. It really closes in the top portion of the frame and brings attention to the soft and unstructured clouds in contrast to the straight harsh lines of the grass.

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    Thanks for the praise. The sky is not burned. This image was made during a break in a storm. The clouds appeared as you see them, dark and low hanging.

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    Reallly nice. You 4x5 guys are really starting to make me question my choice of equipment! Also, what you're doing out there is a lot more a craft than digital will ever be IMO, even though I'm headed that direction. Great work. Keep 'em coming.
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