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    Birthday cake B&W + Colour

    My first B&W with colour edit in PS what do you guys think??

    Now not so big!!
    Thanks for looking!
    Last edited by pympster; 04-11-2007 at 11:22 AM.

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    Re: Birthday cake B&W + Colour

    not a bad subject!. I would say make the round object next to the colore d candel color as well. And then you have yourself a good shot.
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    Re: Birthday cake B&W + Colour

    Quote Originally Posted by HowLowCanYaGo
    not a bad subject!. I would say make the round object next to the colore d candel color as well. And then you have yourself a good shot.
    I dunno if you have them there but its just a chocolate malteser so its just plain brown!! but il have a go thanks for the idea!

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    Re: Birthday cake B&W + Colour

    I like the subject but not the fingers taking or placing the malteser.

    There is something unbalanced about the candles.

    Perhaps its because I have to keep shuffling the pic to see it all. Try posting a smaller version so that it can get critiqued proberly.

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    Re: Birthday cake B&W + Colour

    Ive made it smaller now!

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