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    Birth of a bee

    Heh...taken today...
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    Re: Birth of a bee

    Quote Originally Posted by julsoph
    Heh...taken today...
    Emily

    This image is very well done. The intensity of the colors as well as the detail you captured in the shot are incredible. Kudos to you on a great image.

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    Re: Birth of a bee

    I agree with Ken. That is just outstanding in color and composition!!! The only drawback is that the center of focus looks to be a little short. If only you nailed the eyes in the focus. But, that is just a nit pick. Fantastic image!

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    Re: Birth of a bee

    Hi Emily,
    The colour of the flower is great. I wish the bee would be a bit sharper. Thanks for sharing.
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    Re: Birth of a bee

    Emily, this is a great shot, I love the colors and the pollen/dew drops. I agree that the focus is a little off. Will you describe how you got this shot? For example, tripod or handheld, where were you, did you chase the bee or was this a happy accident, what lens. Thanks!

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    Re: Birth of a bee

    Thanks all for looking and commenting!
    Yeah...the focus is a little off...I persuaded my husband that I NEEDED a lens to go along with my new camera, and I'm getting used to both...lol. It's a quantary 70-300 that has a macro setting, and I was using the macro setting to take some photos of these flowers. I spotted this little bee and just was able to snag this shot before he went on to the next flower.
    Again, thanks so much for the comments and such...I appreciate it!

    Emily

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    Re: Birth of a bee

    Jacqui, I forgot to add...this was just by one of my neighbor's houses, and handheld.

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    Re: Birth of a bee

    my favorite from you yet! what a wonderful capture. my only nitpick- my eye is drawn to the little brown fleck in the top right. other than that i think its great- composition is really awesome.

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    Re: Birth of a bee

    This is one very cool concept. However it's a little bit soft.
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    Re: Birth of a bee

    Thanks Villenadecorte! I see the speck you're talking about. I think it's something on the outside of the flower...

    Thanks Almo also...and yes, this is a little soft. Next time I'm hoping to catch a bit sharper pic.

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    Re: Birth of a bee

    It's a beautiful image, wel spotted !
    The colours are fantastic.

    Shame about the back focus though, it's sharp on the rear of the flower and not on the hoverfly. But you have so little depth of focus handholding it at a reasoinable shutter speed that I'm impressed you got this.

    Perhaps if you selectively soft focus the flower in photoshop you can bring the attention back to the fly in the foreground, instead of the specks of pollen on the blue petals.
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    Re: Birth of a bee

    Hey Paul...thanks for your comments and suggestions on this.

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