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Thread: Bird Tracks

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    Bird Tracks

    I likes the concept when I took it, but I'm afraid its lacking the depth I had visualized.

    Phil G.
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    Re: Bird Tracks

    I also like the concept. Taking the shot from a lower viewpoint might have helped with the depth that you find lacking.

    Also, it might look nice cropped to the approximate dimensions of a vertical frame, where the footprints are a bigger part of the photo. It wouldn't help your depth problem, but I think it would make the photo more interesting.

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    Re: Bird Tracks

    Good idea, but very hard to get those shots working well. A bit too much noise all around the shot which is distracting. I like the rolls of sand in the bottom right side. Try cropping the top half off just below the first blade of grass on the right side in the middle and keep only the foreground? Cheers, S.
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    Re: Bird Tracks

    Thanks guys. Here's a vertical crop.

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