Bike and Shadow - Holga

[mtbbrian]

As you should know by now I have a thing for bikes(amongst other things!) so I was out photographing last Friday and saw this.
The bike shadow was what first caught my eye and then the lines of the rack.
I'd love to hear what you think!
Thanks!!
Brian
Ride On!

[gahspidy]

The shadows would have caught my eyes as well. i like the subject. I don't feel the composition here is working in that it just does not feel right looking straight down the bike rack into the bike. We don't get to see the rack and the rack is partially blocking our view of the bike. I think shooting this on an angle, standing much further to your left might have worked better. Maybe even on the other side of the bike, depending on what was behind you. But this comp is just not feeling quite right.