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    Bike in Motion

    Some of you know I've been trying to improve my motion (panning) photography, last one I showed was a broom from memory? Anyway, I promised I'd come back when I have something better. I like these couple of shots, would you agree I'm getting closer? I could probably do a better job with composition and contrast, particularly for the 3rd shot. Is there enough motion? What would be your advice for me to get an even better shot. I don't use a tripod, I find it prohibitive. I've also been conscious of the background I'm using for these as well. They were taken mid afternoon.

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    Re: Bike in Motion

    I think the background is "ok".. best is on the top one.

    I haven't seen the other shots to compare these to, but I would agree that you're getting close. I do think that they need to be a little bit better though .. you're very close to the threshold of "got it!", just needs to be a little bit sharper.

    If you don't want a tripod that's understandable, but you may want to use another support - a ledge, your knee if you're sitting, etc - to prevent vertical movements.

    As for advice, other than faster horizontal movement is needed for close and faster subjects than farther away and slower ones, just practice (!)

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    Re: Bike in Motion

    I really like the top one - colors, composition etc, are very appealing. The other two are great too - cant wait to see what else you come up with!
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    Re: Bike in Motion

    GB!, Chocolic, thanks for your input. Chocolic I agree with you my favorite is the top one. G you're right on the vertical movement, I need to eliminate that to get the sharpness to make the shot a hit. As far as horizontal, well they have to be riding the bike fast enough, else you have to slow the shutter speed and on a sunny day that gives you too much light. I'm still a bit self conscious when taking these shots so I rush things a bit. Lets see what I come up with next. Again thanks, S
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