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Without the biker, it would be just ordinary. It might interresting to see the biker enlarged a bit and more of the focus of the shot. That being said, I'd be proud if it was one of my shots!
Tuna ~
This looks like the outside of the museum across the street from the White House in D.C. Is that the old executive office building reflected in the windows? Nice shot. I have often admired the detail of that museum's facade but lacked a suitable scene to set it in. I think this is a good answer to that. Beautiful composition and tones. Thanks for sharing it!
I had to look twice to see why the picture was titled "Bicyclist." I think that if the columns were off center, or if the window was cropped so that the top of the windows don't look complete, it would draw the focus down a bit. Otherwise, very interesting photo!
I like the composition of this one. I think the choice of B&W was right and you controlled the reflections in the windows well. I like the pottery in the window on the right. Nice work.
Greg
I am like Barney Fife, I have a gun but Andy makes me keep the bullet in my pocket..
I like the shot, and for me, having to look down to see the biker sitting quietly in his own little world makes it intriguing. At first, i felt unsettled about the center column being off center from between the two windows as everything else is in good symetry. The more I view, the more at ease I am with it. Tones are very strong.
Tuna,,,first thing I noticed was the tonal range,,,clean whites and solid blacks with a long midrange of greys...The building could stand on its own pictorially by including the bicyclist you have added extra interest...Great shot..
Jurgen
Australia
Falang dung nyai
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Thanks to everyone for your comments and critique.
Originally Posted by CLKunst
Tuna ~
This looks like the outside of the museum across the street from the White House in D.C. Is that the old executive office building reflected in the windows? Nice shot. I have often admired the detail of that museum's facade but lacked a suitable scene to set it in. I think this is a good answer to that. Beautiful composition and tones. Thanks for sharing it!
This was shot within view of the White House grounds - on the west side - I believe I was near G and 18th - I'm not sure what building it was - I was simply struck by the architects creation and saw the chance to represent his/her work using the bicyclist as scale. I was rushing through in cold weather on my way to catch the Metro - but the area was full of street shooting opportunities and I plan to return.
Pretty much everyone has made nice coments on the picture. The one thing that stands out to me in the picture is the bike, it;s a single speed! with that said everybody see's something different in each shot.
Jimmy B