Between the lines

[Tyson L. Sparks]

I have mixed feelings about this shot and would love to have some feed back on what everyone thinks of it. My intention was to frame the moon in the lines of the bridge frame work. Please give me your opinion or what I could do to improve or s edit this shot.

[readingr]

Tyson,

I like the concept. my main critique is that the moon is too small and overshadowed by the light and the framework. It is possibly too tight in the frame as well.

Did you take shots with the moon without the light?

What you really need to do is take a zoom to the moon and then paste a larger moon into the space.

Roger