beer effect

[alderse]

Hi,

it is too grey

If you have a good idea for better returned



Thank you.

[MarcusK]

Hey,

Well, considering the main subject, i would have gone for a more close up shot... just upper body.... i think there's a bit much detail here that takes away from the expression...

As for too grey... not necessarily.... at least not that i can see! , maybe a bit more contrast could help.... but not so sure about that!

Cheers,

Marc

[MB1]

I'm thinking you could have shot from a lot closer to seperate the model from the background.

[gahspidy]

It is a bit too gray, but the real problem is all the distractions of the bg and even elements next to the subject. Shooting closer and isolating the subject more would have helped.
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