Drew,

I like the beans spilt and really the composition as a whole is very good.

However, technically as Todd has already pointed out there are a few problems. I agree with this would be better in Colour.

However, the black and white version there is not enough contrast in the picture it just looks a little washy if you get my drift. Also there seems to be a softness to the photo which does not match the subject.

There is an edge running from the bottle to the right edge of the photo which I find distracting.

One last thing is that I am unsure whether I would want the beans cut off or in full view. I think I would need to see both before making the decision.