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    I found this in town, out back of a brewpub. It just looks so out-of-place. I wanted to get closer but didn't want to lose the context of the brewpub, where there's a sea of foamy beer. I did take about 20 shots, some from different angles and of course, closeups of the boat, but until I really get the opportunity to work them, this is the best available shot. Any suggestions or advice?
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    Kind of a neat shot. I like it, it has character. I can't think of too many ways to improve it. It might make a nice postcard image for the brewery.
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    Re: Beached

    What about a public service announcement, " Don't drink and boat".

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    I'd like it better if the building framed the entire boat. Did you get one like that?
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    Re: Beached

    Quote Originally Posted by Frog
    I'd like it better if the building framed the entire boat. Did you get one like that?
    Unfortunately, no. It was sitting at this spot, and there was no way I could get it 'framed'. I wonder if they'd move it for me:idea:

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    lol.....you could always ask
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