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    Barn

    Was quite bored this a.m. so early this afternoon and I got out the camera which I've been too tired to use much lately. Went down my favorite road and found this barn which required a bit of a climb up a steep bank to get at properly.All C&C is welcome. I see a bit of barbed wire in lower left I need to clone out but what do you think otherwise?
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    Re: Barn

    Well, where did the picture go?
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    Re: Barn

    The exposure is very good here. Nice detail in the sky and foreground. I think it needs to be cropped slightly so it won't be so centered. Maybe include all of the rock on the lower left. But the subject is nice. Well spotted.
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    Re: Barn

    Nice Composition, I like the contrast of the barn and the greenery. I would like to see more detail in the barn maybe lighten it a bit. Are those cows lurking in the background?

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    Re: Barn

    Very pleasing to look at, pretty good shot.

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    Re: Barn

    Looks like a great location to shoot at Frog Would love to see this shot taken from a few steps back to show more of the barn and the barbed wire fence. Get more of that overall farm feel.
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    Re: Barn

    Thankyou, all!
    Greg, I do have some in which the barn is more to the left and less field visible. If I shot more to left a road would come into picture in an unflattering way.
    MW, I did lighten the barn a bit but maybe not enough. In the past I've been overly enthusiastic about such things and tried to be more discreet with this one. I'll give it a try with a bit more. And yes those are cows.
    Thankyou Tyson.
    Xia, another forum has asked to see more of the barn, also. Problem is if I took even one step back, I would be tumbling head over heals down a steep bank. My widest angle with my 18-135 would not include the whole barn and couldn't find a composition I liked with wider view. I do have some wider and some closer that I need to look at some more.
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    Re: Barn

    Nothing to add. Everyone has covered it. Like Tyson says...very pleasing to look at.

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    Re: Barn

    Quote Originally Posted by Frog
    Xia, another forum has asked to see more of the barn, also. Problem is if I took even one step back, I would be tumbling head over heals down a steep bank. My widest angle with my 18-135 would not include the whole barn and couldn't find a composition I liked with wider view. I do have some wider and some closer that I need to look at some more.
    One of those locations huh? I hate those, drive me nuts...LOL I have 2 of those locations right now that I want to do but, my widest is a 20-35mm and just won't cover it Excuse me while I lean back and dream about getting the 12-24mm
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