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I think the idea is really great and could yield great results. However, this shot has a light pole running right through the subject from the background, the image seems milky/washed out and perhaps the Not The Nicest Afternoon has something to do with that. But, the composition needs some work. The idea is good, but not presented as well as I have seen some of your other shots.
Don, I agree with the critiques already given but will add that there seems to be alot of editing happening here. The balloons look very. . . "out of place" almost as if you pasted them in from another shot. I'm not suggesting you did, but perhaps whatever editing you applied might be too much.