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  1. 03-30-2008, 03:13 PM #1
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    Balcony and Red Brick

    Not sure if this is a great composition but I liked the color and lines. Let me know what you think.
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    Re: Balcony and Red Brick

    I agree, I like the colors and the lines. The yellow on the banister really pops among all the reds. the Curves of the banister is also interestesting among all the straight lines of the brickworks. Good Job.
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    Re: Balcony and Red Brick

    Because of perspective we would expect the building to appear to be leaning back a bit. With this crop it looks like the buildings are about to fall forward and is a little unsettling-not a bad thing if that is what you intended.

    Nice colors here.
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  4. 03-31-2008, 06:41 AM #4
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    Re: Balcony and Red Brick

    Beautiful composition: view selection and colors. However, I think the railing and posts should be in focus. A smaller aperture (f11 or f16) would improve DOP (depth of field) and make a stronger photo. Keep shooting.
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