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Thread: Baby-Land..C&C

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    Too square to be hip. almo's Avatar
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    Baby-Land..C&C

    These are from a statue in a local cemetery...




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    Re: Baby-Land..C&C

    Wow Almo...your title really does not suggest what I thought I'd be looking at...that's not a bad thing.

    The first pic...I like it a LOT, and my only suggestion might be to add a tiny bit more of the headstone, but that's just a preference thing.

    The second one is great. It actually makes me think of something you'd see on a sunken ship...you know what I mean? Very beautiful, but very sad and eerie at the same time.
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    Re: Baby-Land..C&C

    How haunting! But it's great. I agree with Emily that on the first one, I'd like to know that it's a headstone and not just some marble marker. I think that would lend it greater impact.

    And the second is simply wonderful. Definitely gives it a funereal tone, with the molding and moss and such. Lends it a decrepit air.
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    Re: Baby-Land..C&C

    Those are great photos, sad and eerie, but great.
    I love the second one. The off-center, the slight angle and the color. Nice work!!

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    Re: Baby-Land..C&C

    Quote Originally Posted by almo
    These are from a statue in a local cemetery...




    Some of your best work, I think. How much (if any) photoshopping did you do?

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    Re: Baby-Land..C&C

    Quote Originally Posted by Lava Lamp
    Some of your best work, I think. How much (if any) photoshopping did you do?
    Wow, Thanks for the compliment!

    I did both pretty much the same, though to different degrees.

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    Re: Baby-Land..C&C

    The face of the statue is excellent!! Can I trade the farm print??

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    Re: Baby-Land..C&C

    Almo, the second one is great! Great complement of colors between the green moss and the yellowish cast. I absolutely love it. The first one doesn't do anything for me but the second should definitely stand alone on its own.

    Charles Hess I think it was said once that one of the first rules of portraiture is to focus on the eyes. My *only* nitpick here is that her focus appears to be on the nose, and the eyes are a bit soft.

    Great shot buddy!

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