B & W One Big Arrow

[starriderrick]

B / W with a twist AND the original unedited shot to compare... I cropped this very tight as you can see,added the monochrome grain.Would love to hear your thoughts on this one. Is this ready to print?
Much better at large res. In my opinion. I'll post this B/W (1415 x 650 res.) in my gallery if it's done, if not...bring it! Thanks

Rick
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20mm
3 seconds
F/13
iso 320
tungsten WB





Moffett Towers parking complex.Sunnyvale,ca

[MB1]

Your processed version looks good although to me the whole thing feels tilted to the right-which may be what you intended.

[Greg McCary]

I agree it lookes tilted. I wouldn't have minded seeing it a little wider on the left and let the curb help lead through the shot. The arrows work great.

[danic]

It is ready to print! I perceive the tilt to be a downward slope, as opposed to a tilt from the horizontal.

I always think B&W film is good for night photography. Try some!

[starriderrick]

Thanks for pointing out that oversight. It was 1 degree off. I plan on a return visit with your very good advice Greg.It's 5 minutes from home. Here is a quicky --> note the quality is not even close to as good as the first... but,It's "leveled" and the left side starts to make some sense. :O) Worth a reshoot 4 sure...

Rick