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Thread: A b&w head shot

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    A b&w head shot

    This was a tight crop from a shot last sunday. I shot it with my blad so I could get away with it. Do tell me what you think if it.
    Jeff
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    Re: A b&w head shot

    Good shot.I think you have captured a very private moment.Overall the picture feels soft without being out of focus.You have managed to seperate the model from the background without having the background disturbing the overall capture.The eyes are well lit without being overdone.Good photo.
    Piet.

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    Re: A b&w head shot

    Fantastic ! a great shot, well done

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    Re: A b&w head shot

    Well done.

    Nice look, composition (crop), everything!

    Nits: 1) show a little more of the tree on the right - my eye keeps looking at it to figure out what it is. 2) Seems just a touch flat or dark on my screen. A little digital juice might make it pop. And the only other tiny nit is 3) I'd like a little more catch light in her eyes.

    Please don't take this as a harsh critique, I love the shot!

    And outsanding bokeh on that lens!

    Rick
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    Re: A b&w head shot

    Just a little more on the right and maybe bump up the contrast a little bit. Gotta love that Zeiss glass... Very well done.

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