B&W Baby Portrait - Please Critique

[MJS]

I agree with Allison, great emotion and eye contact. I also agree with the crop changes. It might have a little more impact if you tilted the camera down a bit and panned right a little so her eyes were more towards the upper left diagonal.

Great shot.

[point*break]

Hi All,

Thank you so much for all of your excellent ideas! I will most definitely be using all of your pointers in the future!

You guys are great!!